>>A visual language map of everything that will be included in the novel. This includes a script, 'Copy', that will be a storyline to entwine the plot. This will make it less abstract. The tone and writing is dated, and fantasy/mystical based.
>>The 'Rock Diagram' words, are the terms associated with the philosophy behind that particular rock. These will be pages of the novel that will be the map of the rock that is divided into cooer scheme, topological layers, etc in association with the event that was taking place at the time when the rock was collected.
>>The 'Frames' quotes are real-time based, with basic modern language. How we would normally talk in basic conversation. The quotes in the speech bubbles.
SCRIPT
Title:
In Short: A Tale of Geologic Illumination
Title Page:
In Short: A Tale of Geologic Illumination
Alyssa Pettit
“Publishing” Information:
Copyright 2015 in Beverly, Massachusetts by AP Designs.
All rights reserved. No part of the contents of this book may be reproduced without the written permission of the publishers Alyssa Pettit, in association with Montserrat College of Art. Printed and bound in Massachusetts, USA. All illustrations/photography: Alyssa Pettit
Dedication:
For Jacob
Event #1: “The Escape”
Rock Diagram:
Freedom, Vindication, Escape
Copy:
It was this moment in time when specific rocks were collected, and these rocks served an intense purpose. They were around when extraordinary things happened. It was in a quick stint, that a significant break occurred. A Lass was finally free of one evil soul that belonged to a psychotic dictator. The threat of the noose no longer awaited her. It was a prison break—the best ending to the worst problem. Most stories begin with an end.
Frames:
“Go Nelson, go!”
“Never again will I go back. It was like getting out of prison to be honest.”
Event #2: “Rift Wraith”
Rock Diagram:
Uncertainty, Frustration, Apprehension, Curiosity
Copy:
It was only a few days before The Lass was under the control of someone else. She took to the sea to gather rocks in mental defense. She cast herself away under the cover of hope for continuous opportunities to add to her newfound life. However, there were still monsters that lurked around the corner, tempting her to fall to the life of a wraith; anger, fear, and frustration. She sought temporary relief in a mental forest of darkness.
Frames:
“Sometimes I fade away to this place where no one can reach me. But I just so desperately want to know…”
Event #3: “The Wild Rogue”
Rock Diagram:
Excitement, Hope, Astonishment
Copy:
As frivolous emotions consumed the Lass, a boy appeared. It was unexpected, and sudden. Although she had never been reliant on someone before, she fell for the Rogue almost instantaneously. The anger and fright that she had felt since her escape and the frustration she begrudgingly carried melted away into tears of relief. Who would have imagined someone could have that effect on her? Together, they adventured and took on the curves of this new life.
Frames:
“Hey, you don’t have to be scared.”
“Adventuring with you is beyond fun.”
“I honestly never saw this coming…but I’m glad it did.”
Event #4: “Auntie Whispers”
Rock Diagram:
Annoyance, Hatred, Confusion
Copy:
Things became crowded. Things became complicated. The Lass wished to spend her time in other endeavors. She became infatuated with the Rouge, and started to have thoughts of utter bliss. However, it seemed as if her environment was against her. The rocks that she gathered were items of safety. She hid behind them to shake the feeling of being watched. Escape was once again on her mind.
Frames:
“I feel like Auntie Whispers is always breathing down my neck.”
“Oh, right, I’m the bad guy now. Shame on me.”
“Ignoring me: Commence in 3, 2, 1.”
Event #5: “Rock Fact”
Rock Diagram:
Anger, Aggravation, Frustration, Fury
It was only a matter of time before the Lass grew weary of being suffocated by the people around her. She had to again branch from a life of settling and do what was right for herself. There was no way to deal with the tragedy of being frightened to handle one’s own issues. Her gathered geologic gospels were only temporarily shielding her from the madness she would endure.
Frames:
“I’m going absolutely bonkers, and that’s a rock fact.”
“God, just leave me be! For crying out loud!”
Event #6: “Dream Team”
Rock Diagram:
Friendship, Acceptance
Copy:
No matter the rocks, no matter the collection, The Lass still feared what could be when it came to doing what was right. The Rogue was an explorer, a warrior of the world, and that kept him away at sometimes. Their love for each other grew stronger, but she also acquired a companion through the turn of events that happened. A Maiden of a different taste offered friendship, and a warm place to hang her satchel when the Rogue was reluctantly off at battle. They became fast friends, with an inseparable bond of sisterhood.
Frames:
“You’re totally the girl with the blue eyes! You’re Brittany!”
“Lyssa, we’re like Greg and Wirt! Potatoes and molasses.”
Event #7: “Nelson’s Crash”
Rock Diagram:
Desolation, Stress, Anxiety
Copy:
The eve of escape from the last crucial volatile incident, The Lass fled to her Iron Steed. This steed was one of which she cared about very much. She boarded him in order to escort herself and The Rogue to an enchanted city. Through separate circumstances they journeyed together, until her steed fell victim to a terrible accident. The Rogue held her up as best he could, despite the sadness that consumed his love. She ached for her steel partner, but time would be the only thing to heal it. Music attempted to sooth her, but with a rock clutched in her gentle hand, she waited.
Frames:
“This can’t be happening. Who decided that this was fair?! Now?!”
“High, all the time, to forget I’m missing you!”
“He’ll be okay babe, we’ll get through this.”
“I’m s-so sorry Nel-son, I’m s-orry.”
Event #8: “New Beginnings”
Rock Diagram:
Joy, Safety, Relief
Copy:
Despite the intensity of many bizarre events happening, the Lass finally pulled herself completely into her new life. She was in a new place, a high place, and a place of safely. The longing for a happy life was over. New beginnings were in her reach. She was safe. Her Rogue was caring for her, and the Maiden was a kind soul with words of kindness.
Frames:
“Try and get me now! It’s like a new beginning, really.”
“I’m safe. I can finally breathe again.”
Event #9: “Utter Euphoria”
Rock Diagram:
Enchantment, Elation, Vivacity
Copy:
The events that occurred, the ones that soured The Lass’ outlook of other people, had faded away. They seemed as if they took place ages ago. The Rogue and her adventured, explored, and took on new things together. It was an elegant chaos in which they worked together was beyond most words. Was it possible to reach such euphoria? Clearly, love and inspiration could be found in the most unexpected places.
Frames:
“Usually, when I have bad dreams, I realize I’m dreaming. But then if I find Nelson, he saves me.”
“Well, I can save you now too, ya know.”
Event #10: “Commuter Rail: Outbound”
Rock Diagram:
Comfort, Delight, Sanctity
Copy:
Everything had fallen into place. Her rocks were no longer something she used to hide from the world, but as catalyst for her adventures. The Rogue and The Lass were together and happy. She entrusted her world to him, and he kept it safe. It was like travelling to the countryside ten times over. Her equine friends and their love was also a blessing, for she felt closer to them than ever before. The Iron Steed returned to grace her presence once more. The rocks were examples of bliss; the bliss she was experiencing in her new life. They were now mementos of the past, and though she looked to them for comfort, that was all she had to do. Herself, and her heart were protected by a force to be reckoned with.
Frames:
“Being with you, is like riding Outbound on the Commuter Rail, into the woods, into the country. Can’t really beat that feeling.”
“I’ve honestly never been so happy.”
“It’s called Kota, from the album Animal Magic. That’s so crazy.”
“I draw because the ideas that I have—I mean they have to go somewhere.”
Event #11: “The Future Has Arrived”
Rock Diagram:
Preparation, Realization, Readiness
The Lass was now entering the next phase of her life. Her kingdom was about to change; however it was for the better. The Rogue was by her side, the Iron Steed practiced in waiting stance, and the world was no longer scary but an oyster to her creative mind. Bigger and better things were awaiting her, and she would take them on, with her rocks alongside her.
Frames:
“Future? Bring it. I mean, I have a Trans Am. I can do anything.”
End Page:
Fin.
